Recount Writing-At Dargaville

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On Saturday, my family and I went to Dargaville beach
with our Uncle Jimmy to go fishing.        

First, my family and I got ready to go to the beach.  

We needed a towel, a spare change of clothes, a hat and
sunblock. Next, I helped my mum make some lunch for us. 
After that my Uncle Jimmy laid the line down so he can
catch fish. He caught three big and some small snappers.
My dad said to me, “Abbey, do you want to hold the fish”
and I said, ”yes please”I said.
Finally we packed everything up and went home.