Here is my writing assessment.
Use your writing rubric to assess your Explain Writing.
Remember to write 1 or 2 sentences to explain why you gave your writing each rubric score,
I am a year 5 learner at Tautoro School in Northland, New Zealand. I am in room 6 and my teacher is Whaea Debb.
A special place in a community is a Marae. Why is it a special place.
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A marae is special because it is a place to say goodbye to someone who died. It is a place to awhi and comfort Wanau and
friends who are sad.
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A marae is special because it is a place to celebrate someone who just got married. It is a place to be happy.
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A marae is special because it is a place to have a party.it is a place to spend time with family and friends.
It is a place to build relationships.
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Element
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XEARubric
Score
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Ideas
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A place to say goodbye to someone who died.
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structure
Language
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I have some structure for the type of writing AND I use most of the right words for the type of writing.
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Organisation
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I try to put my ideas in order.
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Vocabulary
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I can write some simple everyday words. I can write words that are important to me.
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Sentence
Structure
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I try to write a few sentences.
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Punctuation
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I am starting to use capital letters and full stops in the right place .I am trying to use ! ?
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Spelling
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I can write some letters for my words.
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What is your total score and what level is it?
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Total Score
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20
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Level
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24
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